1. P1: College graduates make an average of 1 million dollars more in their lifetimes than non-graduates.
2. P2: One can be successful in helping others, which helps to make the world a better place.
3. P3: Residence life helps people diversify themselves.
4. P4: College helps to make people more interesting.
C C: College Education is important to a successful life
So this is what I have come up with for my premises and conclusion for my essay. This is the third time I have reworked it and I am still open for suggestions. Anybody have any ideas about this or any suggestions on how to make it better?
It seems like you would have a hard time trying to prove the 4th premise.
ReplyDeleteYou might want to change 'interesting' to something easier to verify, like 'literate'.
I used interesting somewhat vaguely in my actual essay. I supported it with things like can improve your happiness, remain curious about the world, interesting to other people, doesn’t necessarily make you a more well rounded person, but that is its goal. With these things in mind i think it is more clear what i mean by interesting. Do you agree?
ReplyDeleteMeh...not really.
ReplyDeleteBut go with that anyway.
Ya I was thinking the same thing. Interesting is kind of a vague word, especially for something to defend. I feel like it will be difficult to give it enough clarity and support to make it a strong paragraph.
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